Thanks to those of you who gave suggestions on my last post and to those of you who emailed me longer suggestions. I used a few of them. I have now finished an entire draft of my manuscript - 180 pages. It's only going to get longer in my rewrite, which I am already hard at work on. Today I added two sections in my community and relationships chapter: 1. Introverts and Conflict and 2. Relationships and Technology.
I feel like I'm swimming in a sea of my own words. I'm so grateful for editors who can help sort this mess out!